Who’s The Hero In Your Family?
WALT:
I elaborate on my ideas with relevant details e.g. each idea has supporting detail
I can use the 4 E’s in my writing- Evidence, Explanation, Example, Elaboration
To create a picture in the reader’s head
Dad
kind, long-suffering, fancy dresser, helpful, hard-working.
kind
My dad is kind so if I asked him for help he would help me so that's why my dad is kind. Even though my dad does not have that much money he buys stuff for me and my sister.
long-suffering
My dad is long-suffering because he got a blind eye when he was Young so now he has to go to the doctor's so His eyes can get back to Normal. When he Was young he got punched on the side of his eye what And he has a Blockage in his Heart. He has to go to the doctor for that.
fancy dresser
He is a fancy dresser but he doesn't Dress that fancy at church and having family meetings to go to our church at home.
Helpful
dad is so helpful because every time I have to do my homework he always does Some of it for me even he doesn't have that much time to help me
hard-working
The reason why he is a hard-working man is because everyone told him to bo stuff and it costs money.
